Nowadays, the most important task is the environmental protection of our planet for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
40 minutes, 250 words at least.
Please read the correction to the answer of student 1 HERE. Read the answer of student 2 also.
Solution
Environment Protection of Our Planet for Future Generations
Environment Protection of Our Planet for Future Generations:
Our planet Earth is already facing various types of air and water pollution, which are quite detrimental to the very existence of the upcoming future (which is mostly used for inanimate objects). I firmly believe that it is the need of the hour to protect the environment for the next generation. (Better to mention the reasons supporting your argument.)
Industries, as well as automobiles, are two power-hungry sectors that completely rely on fossil fuels, like, for example, coal and petroleum. High consumption of these energy sources releases carbon dioxide and sulfuric gases. These poisonous gases are the main culprit behind global warming and the ozone layer hole over the Antarctic continent. But why is it the top priority for future generations?). Global warming is leading to a high temperature in Earth’s atmosphere, which is resulting in a scarcity of rain and a change in its overall pattern, adversely affecting agriculture production. One study points out that, by 2050, humans (the future generations) will suffer from a severe scarcity of food due to global warming. Whilst (wrong use of while construction). It is either used to express contrast or to express two things happening at the same time.) The destruction of the ozone layer is causing skin pigmentation and skin cancer in people. The incidence of cancer due to the sun’s radiation is expected to increase dramatically shortly. Apart from this, polluted air is also the underlying factor behind respiratory problems, and it is quite evident that future generations will not be an exception to this.
In addition to the above, the use of pesticides and insecticides is causing water and air pollution and becoming a part of our food chain; even pests are acquiring pesticide resistance and posing a threat to other species (threatening the existence of other species.). The unprecedented use of these toxic substances is leading to several unexpected ailments among newborn children. If their use is not curtailed immediately, the children in the future will suffer from stunted mental faculties and, in severe cases, physical disorders such as heart ailments. Therefore, it is creating an environmental imbalance. Moreover, the leather and fabric industries are also releasing their chemical waste into river water, making it impure to drink or unsuitable for consumption. (But why is this the top priority for future generations?)
Conclusively, in conclusion, I still emphasize that it is high time to take preventive measures to check environmental degradation; otherwise, the following generations will have to suffer a lot.
(A conclusion is either a paraphrasing of the ideas expressed in the body paragraphs OR a future-based vision. In conclusion, if environmental degradation is not checked, the future generation will suffer from various diseases and witness a severe shortage of food. This may result in social unrest, economic depressions, and, in extreme cases, the annihilation of mankind.
