The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

40 minutes, 250 words at least.

Answer:

They say that the rising population on the earth is getting more crucial (an issue can be crucial, but population can’t be) nowadays so this is the biggest issue at the present days (nowadays = present days. Repetition.). Of course I know that (No need to state this. Your sentence is still complete.) the reasons of this problem are not so simple because it depends on the present states of the regions. However, I think the lack of knowledge (is this the reason for increase in population? If yes, write it.) is one of the most problematic things to be solved. I admit that the keeping increase increasing of world population is the biggest problem (You’ve mentioned this in the first sentence as well: “biggest issue”) for human nature, but I also believe that it can be solved if you find what is the main matter (instead of writing this, mention the “main matter”) and work harder for solving it (Please mention how “working harder” will solve this issue).

Let me write a sample introduction to explain the elements of a good introduction: The rising population of the Earth is becoming a crucial issue these days. The reasons behind this phenomenon are complex and vary from one region to another. However, it is primarily due to lack of knowledge about benefits of family planning. I believe the issue can be solved if governments impart information about need for family control and provides incentives for the same. 

While writing an introduction, please keep in mind the following elements:

The introduction is about 50 to 70 words long.
It should MENTION everything that you plan to EXPLAIN in the body paragraphs.
It should be SPECIFIC in nature, not GENERAL or vague.
Do not repeat any ideas.

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