Topic: Feedback for Data analysis

The feedback should be about the way that the methods used and figures used, and the organization of the paper and some advises.
Try to be positive feedbacks but some advice is fine.

* please use words better than my example, not that simple.
For example:
I like that you used (this way…)with your survey
your analysis is critical and clear
Your charts and tables are creative and clear
It is a good start….
It is interesting that you …. I can’t wait to see the rest of your paper
You might want to add some images and charts to explain what you said
That is interesting your interview and survey found….
I think your findings will be helpful for your paper.