Irish physiotherapists current practice and perception of cardiovascular rehabilitation for stroke patients

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1) supervisor said there are repetitive sentences try to take off those sentences and put another instead of
2) she said in general the thesis or dissertation descriptive more than critical
so it is necessary to make it more critically she did not tell me which section exactly but i think the writer knows better than me but think we need to focused on
literature review , discussion and result
3) any descriptive part the writer take off and put critically sentences instead of it deleted please because the number of words
4) be careful the over all the number of words do not move up 15.000 words without references because already i have 13,000 words so increase 2000 critical sentences
and change 3000 descriptive sentences and make them critically
5) make it simple , clear and short sentences
6) make it the same tone of my thesis and the same references style
7) the space between line is 1,5
8) can you send a draft of the writer’s work day by day for following his/her work.