Have you read the requirement and instructions ???
Reason:
I send the study that I want the writer to write about( The Reduction of Hospital Wait Times and Avoidable Hospitalization Significantly helps in the Reduction of Costs ) and he wrote about communicable diseases ????
More comments about the paper:
Why you where mention and writing about (OBSERVATIONAL STUDIES) you have to write what type of observational study and no need to write a lot about the background and forgot cover all the question in the tutorials because it’s not respectful if you just see the example and do the same as the example this is not smart. this is irrespecutful and also the example is to help you get some of the idea not to write same topic. I was very clear about what I really want
for example if you choose to write about case control study or any kind of study that related to the research proposal that I sent. So you have to clarify everything : research question, the type of the study you will conduct the study with, for example: you choose case control why? and why not you didn’t choose cohort study? advantages and disadvantages and try to cover all the highlight questions in the tutorials
10/14/16 10:55
I am asking for revision for this paper because I just received the feedback from my professor.
##Feedback:
As I’ve mentioned in the last two classes now, all you need for the abstract is the Question, a PICOT breakdown, Study Design, and Theoretical framework (optional) on one page, no need for justifications.
Looking over what you sent, it doesn’t contain a PICOT breakdown. There are a lot of sentences (much too long, remember 1 page!) but they don’t have a lot of substance to them. This assignment is not marked, we only want to make sure you’re on the right track and have the basics down pat – what you sent me doesn’t convince me that is the case. Keep working on it.
Description
This order need a high level of doctoral professor who knows epidemiology and methodology and has a strong background in research filed.
This assignment is all about how to build a research from the scratch and in this paper I want to cover all the highlight points that mentioned in all the tutorial in the first 4 classes of this course. In the file name: OBSERVATIONAL STUDIES TUTORIALS
Try to answer and write in details why and how you choose everything and why not ignore the other methods or study design …
All the sources and references are mentioned in each class, please try to read them to understand the concept of the requirements and how will you write the paper.
What title you should choose in this paper?
I already uploaded the research that I worked on it before and I will build it again through the course concepts and its theoretical way and explanation of everything and also in a simple way that we can only consider one country and no need to 3 countries as it was written in the research project.
= This is going to be the starting of the final paper of the course at the end of the term and we are looking just to write down the abstract for now regarding the highlight points in all 4 tutorials in the first 4 classes of the course.
I attached the following:
== File1: (OBSERVATIONAL STUDIES TUTORIALS ) The 4 classes with the required reading and the concepts + Tutorial questions.
== File2: (research proposal final) the research project where you can write the research question and get an idea about what I will be working on.
== File3: Example of the really simple (not full example) of the abstract from the previous students in this course.
== File4: example of the final protocol paper that we should hand in by the end of this course ( just to give you an idea about it)
