2. Evolution ? Explain your actual writing process for the essay

? How did you put the essay together ? grouping, outlining, storyboarding? Drafts? ? How did your thesis evolve? ? How did you write the introductory paragraph? Conclusion? ? What information (quotations, paraphrases, points) did you add or delete? Why? ? At any point, were you forced to overhaul the paper?
3. Thinking Style ? Did you analyze, clarify, and elaborate the ideas that you encountered in the text? ? Did you insert your original ideas and interpretation while sticking to the textual evience?

4. Assessment ? Comment on your paper?s strengths and weaknesses ? What aspects of the topic put obstacles in your writing way, and how did you deal with
them?
5. What ?deep? elements of composition did you do especially well here?
? Focus on thesis, organization, argument, support, and voice. Do not elaborate on grammar or sentences. o Thesis ? focused, narrow, precise assertion that evolves through your paper o Organization ? includes unity, coherence, introduction, body, conclusion,
paragraph order, sentence order o Argument ? logical structure, inclusion of well-placed topic sentences, persuasiveness, clear direction, use of key words o Support ? use of facts, examples, illustrations, details that are representative, ample, and support the point. Appropriate use of sources o Voice ? appropriate tone, logical, credible, trustworthy, original