IELTS Essay Correction: People Should not Work Once they Reach the Retirement​ Age – 3.

Some people believe that people should not work once they reach the retirement age. Do you agree or disagree? Please read the sample answer and response of student 1. Answer: Whether people should work or not when they attain the retirement age is a moot issue among many people. I personally believe that people should work evenRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: People Should not Work Once they Reach the Retirement​ Age – 3.[…]

IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events – 3.

Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Please read answer corrections of Student 1, Student 2 and student 3 as well. Answer: WeRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events – 3.[…]

IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events – 2.

Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Please read answer corrections of Student 1 and Student 2 as well. Answer: A government’sRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events – 2.[…]

IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events

Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Please read another student’s response here. Answer: Some people argue that governments should allocateRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: Government Should Invest Money in Arts and Cultural Events[…]