Some people believe that people should not work once they reach the retirement age. Do you agree or disagree? Please read the sample answer and response of student 1. Answer: Whether people should work or not when they attain the retirement age is a moot issue among many people. I personally believe that people should work evenRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: People Should not Work Once they Reach the Retirement Age – 3.[…]
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IELTS Essay Correction: People Should not Work Once they Reach the Retirement Age.
Some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience. 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Answer: Introduction: (Introduce the topic and STATE your opinion. MENTION the reasons supporting your opinion.) The recentRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: People Should not Work Once they Reach the Retirement Age.[…]