IELTS Essay Correction: Should Discrimination Against Older Workers be Made Illegal?

“Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal? “ 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Answer: Before writing thisRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: Should Discrimination Against Older Workers be Made Illegal?[…]

IELTS Essay Correction: Population of Some Countries Includes Large Number of Young Adults.

At the present, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantage? 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Answer: Youth is a valuable asset for any country and it (no pronoun to refer back toRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: Population of Some Countries Includes Large Number of Young Adults.[…]

IELTS Essay Correction: More Young Adults Than Older People in Population.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 40 minutes, 250 words at least. Answer: Nowadays, the young people outnumber the elderly groups in many countries which gives great advantages especiallyRead more about IELTS Essay Correction: More Young Adults Than Older People in Population.[…]